1. Read as much as you can. Don’t restrict yourself to the genre in which you write. Try everything, from classics to pulp, new to old, fiction, faction or non-fiction. For instance, how many of these have you read? That’s this week’s homework! š
2. Join a class in creative writing, whether ārealā or online. It’s where I got my big break. Visit your local library (in this age of cuts to budgets, they need all the support they can get) to find out about local groups for readers and writers, and check out online sites such asĀ http://romanceuniversity.org.Ā
3. Join groups such as The Romantic Novelistsā Association (http://www.rna-uk.org/) in the UK or Romance Writers of America (http://www.rwa.org/) who provide lots of useful information and contacts. The Marcher chapter of theĀ Romantic Novelistsā Association has been a great help to me. The support of otherĀ writers, and the constructive criticism provided by writing workshops is invaluable.
To make sure you don’t miss any of my top tips, followĀ my blogĀ using the sign-up form on the right hand sidebar of this page. I send out aĀ newsletterĀ a couple of times a year with news about my writing, country life, competitions and offersājoin my mailing list here.
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This Writing Life: There’s A Busy Week Ahead…
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Only a short blog today as Iāve got a very busy week ahead. Iām editing my new thriller to a tight deadline, trying to get round to beta reading my friend Lindsay Deboutās second collection of Warming Tales, and on Tuesday thereāsĀ a meeting of my local RNA group to discuss, among other things, our next workshop.Ā
IĀ hope summer still has a while to run, but my short romance, My Dream Guy, is published tomorrow, Tuesday, 15th September. You can reserve your copy of My Dream Guy from Amazon by clicking on this magical link:Ā http://myBook.to/MyDreamGuy.
I had some great news a few days ago. BothĀ His Majesty’s Secret Passion and Her Royal Risk, the first two books in my Princes of Kharova series for The Wild Rose Press are up for nomination in The Romance Reviews Readers’ Choice Awards, Winter 2015.
His Majesty’s Secret PassionĀ is my idea of escapist romantic fantasy, with an exhausted businesswoman and a king in disguise finding fun in the sun at a luxurious spa. There’s sun, sea and secrets to be discovered in the ultimate in getting away from it all.
Her Royal RiskĀ pits a perfectĀ personalĀ assistantĀ against the boss from hell in a new job that’s nobody’s idea of heaven. It’s only when Krisia and Athan are faced with a disaster they discover working together is a lot more productive than pulling each other apart…and it’s pretty romantic, too!
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You can find out more about both books by clicking here. I’d be really grateful if you could cast your vote for His Majesty’s Secret Passion by clicking here, and for Her Royal Risk, here.Ā Thank you so much!Ā
How Much Money Is Your Writing Making…
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…For Other People?
It used to be almost impossible to get published. Hardly any publishers would look at unsolicited manuscripts. Unless you had an agent, you couldn’t get anywhere. Agents had such a huge pool of talent to fish in, they could pick and choose whether or not they even answered your enquiry. Ā If you were desperate to see your work in print, the only other option was vanity publishers, who wanted a lot of money from you, then delivered very little.
The explosion of self-publishing and the huge presence of Amazon has changed all that. Getting your name on the cover of a book is practically obligatory these days, and to upload your work in the hope your blog (or ebook) goes viral costs nothing. Or does it?
I’m not talking about the cost of stationery, computers, writing courses, and subscriptions to group such as The Society Of Authors, The Romantic Novelists’ Association, or the Romance Writers of America. All these are vital, practical, tax-deductible, and in the case of stationery and local group meetings, recreational. (I’m a kid in a sweetshop when it comes to browsing round anywhere like Staples.)
It’s the little extras that add up to big deductions. The 2014 Digital Book World and Writer’s Digest Author Survey discovered that over three-quarters of writers earn less than Ā£600/$1,000. If you can bear to see the painful facts, read moreĀ here. When you consider that even big publishers expect you to spend money (or at least plenty of time, which comes to the same thing in the end) on publicising your book, you’ll see it’s important to spend carefully.
If you go the route of conventional publishing, all the editing, production and artistic costs should be covered by the firm. Some tiny independents may ask for a sub. This doesn’t necessarily mean they’re a vanity outfitāthey may just be keen to get some help with costs, which will secure your devotion to their cause. Get your contract checked by The Society ofAuthors or a literary attorney, to make sure.
If you decide to self-publish, join a group such as The Alliance Of Independent Authors, and do plenty of research. Spend money on getting your work professionally edited, and in hiring a good cover artist but beyond that, think carefully about whether you really need all the dozens of other lovely services on offer. Always remember, the definition of an expert is only a person who knows 3% more than you do! Keep your eyes and ears open: word of mouth is as good a way to find reliable editors and artists as it is to find good books.
And don’t think that once your book is out in the public domain all you have to do is wait for your Ā£600 to come rolling in. Ā Not only are there sharks circling before you publish, the virtual high seas are full of pirates. Philip Pullman put itĀ perfectlyĀ when he said “Stealing music and books online is like picking pockets”. You can read more of what he said here. It’s not a happy article but as they say on the true crime programmes, “don’t have nightmares”. Writing’s the best job there is. Look on anything you earn as a bonus (but make sure you hang onto as much of the money you get as you can!).
Creative Writing Workshop: Extract from my current WIP
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The Romantic Novelists’ Association does a lot for writers, and funding a creative writing workshop for its Marcher Ladies Chapter last year led toĀ some invaluableĀ spin-off sessions. I gave the opening pages ofĀ His Majesty’s Secret Passion, a test-run at our first workshop, and the completed book has now been published by The Wild Rose Press. Ā Ann Ankers arranged another day-long study session at Hereford’s Courtyard arts centre so I submitted the first ten pages of my current Work In Progress, Love On The Run.
You can read about a previous session here, but to recap, everyone submitted ten pages of fiction to Ann. She made sure all the samples were anonymous, beforeĀ circulating them among the workshop members. We did a report on each, then presented our thoughts on everyone’s work during the day.Ā
Like His Majesty’s Secret Passion and Her Royal Risk,Ā Love On The Run is aĀ contemporaryĀ romance set in the fictional Mediterranean country of Kharova. It’s the fourth book in myĀ Princes Of Kharova series for The Wild Rose Press. The first two have already been published in both ebook and paperback (you can find out more about those here) and the third book, Heart Of A Hostage, will join them soon.Ā
Here’s the extract I presented to the workshop,Ā with all the suggestions forĀ improvement put in place. What do you think? To follow the progress of this, and my other writing projects, you can like my author page on Facebook, here.
Love On The Run
CHAPTER ONE
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Megās bad day was about to get a whole lot worse. The way her employerās face twisted could predict Ā a skivvy’s fortune better than one of those cellophane fish from a Christmas cracker. Ā
āYou took your time fetching that champagne. Went to France for it, did you? Huh. Staff these days.āĀ
Lucida Tipoli didnāt bother to get up from her recliner in front of the TV. She could poke Meg easily enough by sticking out her foot. āThinks sheās something special, because she lives in the house with us. It never does to let girls get above themselves,ā the blowsy, fifty-something woman told her husband.
āWe only took you in out of the goodness of our own hearts, remember.ā Arturo Tipoli added, without taking his eyes off the coronation coverage. This was the tiny country of KharovaāsĀ
second king in a year, and the first one to make it as far as the throne. Meg had a sneaking suspicion the Tipolis were only watching in the hope something would go wrong with this royal effort, too. Ā
You want me to remember your so-called generosity? You never let me forget it, Meg thought. She didnāt know which hurt mostāfighting the urge to scowl, or biting her tongue to avoid telling her employers what she thought of them.
Another six months, and Iāll have saved enough to walk away from you forever, you rich, idle bitch. As long as you pay what you owe me…
āIf she had more sense, she wouldnāt be living off other peopleās charity.ā
And…breathe! Meg told herself, I donāt have to take this for much longer. Another one hundred
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and eighty four days, five hours, then I can tell you both where to stick your job. But until then, I need you as much as you need me.
āWhat would your poor mother say if she could see you now!ā
If you treated me well and paid me better, Mum and Dad might even be proud of me again, Meg thought, but paying me more would mean I could escape from this place a lot faster…
āWhat are you smirking at?ā
Megās face fell. Who am I kidding? Iām dreaming. Iāll never escape.
This was her reality. Blame and blows. The hardest of those was not hearing anything from Rob for months.Ā
He should have sent for me by now. Something must have happened. She worried about him all the time. Heād always wanted to fight with the rebels, to make a better life for ordinary people. He left, promising to send her money to tide her over until she got work. Instead, desperate to pay her bills. sheād been forced to settle for this horrible job. It was the only position which didnāt ask for references. Ā
āHurry up and open that bottle! We need to toast the kingās first speech!ā Lucida snapped.
Megās nimble fingers untwisted the wire cage over the bulbous cork, then released it exactly as the butler had taught her. Wasting no more than a sigh of carbon dioxide, she tilted a crystal champagne flute and poured in the golden liquid as words whispered from the television.
āOur live broadcast from King Athanās coronation has been interrupted by circumstances beyond our control. Normal service will be resumed as soon as possible, Until then, hereās some music…ā
āDamned technology,ā Arturo Tipoli grumbled, but the screen was already flickering back into life. His wife was more interested in the drinks.
āThatās no good! Where was the pop? You canāt have champagne without a pop. Go and fetch another bottle. Now!ā she roared. Meg leapt aside, but instead of a blow from Mrs Tipoli, she suffered a direct hit to the heart.Ā
āGood Godāwhatās happening?ā
A disaster was unfolding on the TV, right in front of them. For once in their lives, the Tipolis were silenced. They sat open mouthed, staring at the screen.
“We interrupt this broadcast with a newsflash. An incident during the coronation of King Athan has resulted in the arrest of six rebels. A seventh man, believed to be twenty-four-year-old Rob Steyner, escaped. The security services say he is extremely dangerous, and should not be approached. Heās believed to be heading back to the rebel stronghold in the north of the country.”Ā
A spasm of shock rocketed through Megās body, flipping the bottle from her hands. Mrs Tipoli screamed, but it bounced against the arm of the couch and quick-thinking Meg caught it on the rebound.Ā
āYou stupid girl! Have you any idea how much that costs? Keep your mind on your job!ā
Meg wasnāt listening. A photo of Rob was on the TV. Sheād taken it last summer, but it felt fresh as yesterday. Rob was laughing as a sea breeze tugged at his jacket. Her happiest day, reduced to a TV demand for information. So much had happened since that scorching summer. The awful, gut-wrenching row at Christmas with her parents. Robās determination to leave the city, and make a new life…Ā
Where is he now? The single familiar picture became half a dozen strangers. At least heās not in a police cell with them. Five of the photos were police mugshots of desperate-looking men. The sixth was an exception, in more ways than one.Ā
Meg recognised him. He was the new kingās valet. Both men had visited this house, before Athan inherited the throne.Ā Tirek Kalmend, the TV called him. The name meant nothing to Meg. The Tipolis knew Meg had form when it came to bringing shame down on a household, so they tried to keep her out of the way when they had guests.Ā They werenāt about to let her wreck their chances with the royal family and their supporters.Ā
The photo of this Tirek was from happier times, too. He was fooling about with friends at some charity fundraising event. He looked like what he was, a soldier letting off steam.Ā
āAnd him the new kingās closest friend,ā Mr Tipoli grumbled. āJust goes to show, you canāt trust anyone.ā
Thank goodness I can rely on Rob, Meg thought. I think…
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Tirek watched a soldier snap the low-tech shackles onto his wrists, and wondered how heād fallen into this nightmare. Arrested along with the five total strangers heād helped round up and arrest, his loyalty was turning into a sick joke.
āIām innocent. Why wonāt you believe me?ā
āBecause thatās what they all say.ā The guard shoved him down the cathedral steps toward a waiting police van. āIf I listened to all the bs Iām fed, the countryās prisons would be empty, and my pockets would be full.ā
āI wouldnāt count on it. Athanās going to come down hard on corruption.ā Tirek growled.
ā…says the man who tried to wreck the kingās coronation, and masterminded a plot to overthrowĀ him.ā
āThatās not true. Why will no one listen to me?ā
āThe daughter of the kingās private secretary stood up in the cathedral and told everyone you were at the heart of the latest plot. Thatās why.āĀ
āI was working undercover. It was supposed to be aāā Tirek stopped. This might be the second worst disaster of his life, but knowledge was power. Heād keep quiet about his inside knowledge until he could tell the only person who really mattered. Ā
Why bother? No oneās listening. I saved Athanās life, but heās cut me dead. After everything Iāve done for him…now heās king, heās getting rid of all his trusted advisors and filling the palace with new faces, Tirek thought.Ā But thereās no time to be bitter. Iāve got to clear my name. That demands cool thinkingāandĀ proof.Ā
His mind worked fast. Capturing rebel chief Mihail Dukagjini would be the perfect revenge on his accusers. Especially the woman who ruined his life…
Getting his own back on Bella Tipoli meant making a break for it. Tirek clasped his hands together. Swinging his shackled arms in a horizontal blow, he sent his guard tumbling in front of his comrade. As they stumbled, Tirek snatched his chance and dodged down the nearest alleyway. He was cuffed, but knew these back streets like a native. Working and clubbing with Prince Athan taught him the skills of survival long ago. The stakes were sky high. It was a shame this wasnāt a game of poker, but today, the deck was stacked against him. Ā
What innocent man goes on the run? One who knows heās going to be stitched up by a show trial. Tirekās mind raced almost as fast as his feet. Heād been ruined once before, yet clawed his way back to make a good life for himself. Faced with disaster again, this time he wasnāt going to go quietlyāwherever he was headed.
The city was deserted. Everyone was indoors, watching what was left of the coronation coverage after all the excitement. In the distance, the deep baying of hounds started up. Tirek spotted a plastic trash bin, and used it to help him vault onto a recycling skip.Ā Once he was secure, he leaned down and hurled the rubber bin away down the lane, back the way heād come. It made almost no sound, and would delay anyone chasing him. He used the skip to reach a high garden wall, bracing himself for a slow, dangerous shuffle, eight feet above ground where any tracker dogs couldnāt catch his scent.Ā
Tirek looked around, getting his bearings. The house was one of the Tipoli familyās more expensive properties, in the best part of town. Its garden wall was good and wide. He made a crouching run of almost a hundred yards before the boundary kinked left, and his way was blocked by the outstretched arms of an ancient yew tree, leaning out over a lane.Ā
The racket from his pursuers grew louder. They were hunting him like an animal. This is one lone wolf whoās not going to get cornered, he thought, burrowing into the greenery.
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Meg was on autopilot. Her mind worked at a million miles an hour, while her body waded throughĀ treacle. While Rob was on the run, there was still hope for him. For them both. She thought of the life sheād left behind at home.Ā Things were supposed to improve when she ran away to be with Rob. Now her life was all arguments and misery again.Ā
All I want is to be settled and happy. Whatās so wrong with that?
āAre you asleep girl? Get those clean clothes out on the line while theyāve still got time to air! The kingās supposed to be speaking in ten minutes time. Youāll need to have that done and be back in here with more champagne before then!ā
Meg carried the washing basket outside to the airer. Like some other things the Tipolis didnāt want to see, it was hidden from the house by a bank of spotted laurels. The sun was high and hot, but a shiver ran down her spine. She thought she felt eyes, watching her. She looked round, but the place was deserted. She was the only staff member allowed out here. The shed door hung open, but there was nothing but a scatter of tools abandoned inside after the last gardener got sacked for making too much noise. She stepped over the axe heād dropped, when he stormed out after a shouting match with MrsĀ Tipoli.
They were lucky he only ran away, she thought. I wish I had the nerve to do that.
Tirek gazed down on the kind of life heād left behind. Through the Tipoliās kitchen window, he saw a heavy, dark bottle foiled in gold sitting on the sill. He loved champagne, and could still remember his first taste of the stuff. It was full bodied, enticing his spirits to dance, like the glittering lights in the bright blue eyes of that girl pegging out the washing. Ā
Raised voices inside the house were another barbed memory from his past. He wondered who his own family were threatening now. The yearning for all the luxuries of his past life shriveled again. As a child, heād thought money could buy anything. As he grew, he found happiness missing from the shopping list. His own family could buy and sell this Tipoli tribe a dozen times out of petty cash. But for all his relative poverty, the patriarch of the Tipoli family sounded no happier than Tirekās own father.
A small, stifled sound pulled his attention back down into the garden.
The girl was crying.Ā
That was too much for Tirek. Behind him, out in the city, the tracker dogs were getting closer. One of two things was going to happen. He could be caught up here, without trying to do anything for the crying girl. Or he could buy some time before his capture by dropping into this garden to do something about her tears before he either got caught, or she handed him over. It didnāt matter to Tirek either way. The way his luck was going, heād end up a prisoner, sooner or later.
āPsst!āĀ he hissed.Ā
Emerging from an earthquake of shivering sobs, she looked around the garden.Ā
āUp here!ā
She tipped her head back to face the cloudless blue sky.
The pursuit teams were so close now, Tirek could hear the noises the dogs made even when they werenāt barking. They were straining on their leashes, their handlers cursing as canine claws scrabbled against the cobblestones…
āIn the tree!ā Tirek whispered as loud as he could.
One of the hounds let out a bloodcurdling howl. The girl shrank, and instead of looking up at Tirek, turned in the direction of the sound. Tirek did the same, looking across to a solid wooden door, let into the outside wall. The great iron ring twisted, and it was shaken furiously.
āWho is it?ā the girl shouted.Ā
ā Police. Looking for an escaped terrorist!ā
“This is the Tipoli household. Weāre all decent people here,ā she said.
His sharp hearing attuned to the sounds of pursuit, Tirek laughed silently when he heard her mutter āthose not part of the family, anyway,ā
āSorry to have troubled you, miss!ā the policeman shouted, kicking his dog on down the lane.Ā
Tirek could have cheered. The girl picked up her basket, and was already heading toward the house
āPsstāIām up here. In the tree! Believe me, Iām not a rebelābut does that pack of hounds sound like theyād listen to reason?ā
She stopped, and turned.Ā āNo…āĀ
Her hesitation was bad news. The sun was behind her, so her narrowed eyes had nothing to do with glare.
ā…but why are they chasing you if youāre innocent?ā
āIām the new kingās best friend, whatever lies anyone might be spreading. Do you honestly think Iād take refuge within a hundred miles of a Tipoli residence if I wasnāt absolutely desperate?ā
Her sudden smile gave all his clouds silver linings.
āStay there, while I stall the family and think up a plan,ā she said in a low voice.
āDonāt bother. Iāve already got one.ā
She stopped, hesitated, then swung round and headed for the wall where he stood. With a jolt, Tirek found himself looking down between the plump globes of her breasts. If he didnāt have the hounds of hell on his tail, he would have savoured the moment.Ā
āI like your style, and I need help to get these cuffs off. I neverĀ thoughtĀ I’d thank God Kharovan security was still stuck in the Dark Ages. That cold chisel in the shed might do it,ā he nodded toward the building. While she fetched it along with a heavy hammer, Tirek dropped down from the wall, heading for the wood-chopping block beside the shed.
āIf you were one of the rebels, you’d know Rob?ā She whispered, frowning as she lined the heavy metal blade across the emergency handcuffs issued to every member of the palace guard.Ā
Yes, if your help depends on it, Tirek thoughtā but she didnāt give him time to answer.
āHe went off to get a job at Castle Dukagjini. Thatās more help to the rebels than working in a city garage would be.ā
Better and better, Tirek thought.Ā āRob? Yeah. Everybody knows him. A good sort.āĀ
āDo you really think so?ā
Tirek didnāt have time to notice the strange inflection in her voice. He was too busy wondering whether he was about to lose any fingers as she lined up the sharp metal chisel on theĀ short length of chain joining his wrists. There wasnāt much room for error.
To Be Continued…
So far, I’ve only written the first ten pages on Love On The Run. Bearing in mind this is the first draft,Ā what do you think of the opening?
Writing A Book In A Month, Part Three…
My writing got derailed by vital admin this week, but my NaNoWriMo word count’s risenāalthough in fits and starts.
I’ve written hereĀ and here about how I’ve been helped by creative workshops organised by the Marcher Chapter of the Romantic Novelists’ Association. The most recent one helped me refine the first ten pages of a new project,Ā Tasting The Peach.Ā I’m now turning this embryo into the initial draft of a full-length novel, using National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) 2014 to spur me on. NaNoWriMoĀ relies on donations, and as I write this they’ve raisedĀ $1,034,544.78Ā so far this year. You can click on the figure to contribute, and help support the organisation.
By Monday morning, 17th November, I’d reached a word count of 33,629. The NaNoWriMo website has a load of exciting data, which makes it just right for an obsessive like me. When I update my daily word count, it calculates my average, and from that how long it will take me to reach the 50,000 word target. As the deadline of 30th November gets closer, the stress increases. My daily average is 1865 now, but I had a bit of a slump midweek.
I’ve never written a crime novel before, but it didn’t me take long to work out they are books which are best written backwards. I started on November 1st with my two main characters fully formed in my mind, but only a vague idea of what was going to happen to them. I opened a file, called it Chapter One, and started to type.
I managed to keep my butterfly mind pinned on DI Josh Miller’s unravelling of the conspiracy behind a politician’s murder, but the plot twists were coming as much as a shock to me as they were to him. Who knew a bacon roll would play such a pivotal…well, role? I didn’t, and I’m supposed to be the all-seeing author. I needed to step back and take a long view of where this book was heading. The trouble was, all I could see was the NaNoWriMo cut-off point of 30th November, hurtling toward me. Ā
Then, courtesy of the publisher Wild Rose Press, I was given the perfect excuse to take a break from working onĀ Tasting The Peach.Ā The galley proofs for my next release, His Majesty’s Secret Passion, arrived. Concentrating on checking everything was perfect before my new book goes to print gave me the change of pace I needed. My daily word count for NaNoWriMo suffered, but by working late and early each day I squeezed in some forward planning on motivations and motives forĀ Tasting The Peach, too. Ā This allowed me to catch up, once the proofs were checked. I’m now back on target for NaNoWriMoājust about!
If you’re working on your own NaNoWriMo project, how are you getting on? If you’d like to keep up to date with the progress of my next release,Ā His Majesty’s Secret Passion, just visit my new author page over on Facebook, and hit the “like” button.